if you’ve read my other questions you know i write books for a living. but i just want to know what you guys think of these two new idea i came up with while
1st story: Saw at a coffe shop a dad asked his son to pick up a fallen toy.
2nd story: saw a re-run of the apollo space mission
ok heres the idea… one is sort of gothic and other is not at all
the gothic one: it is a very queer story and i even think its weird. but it involves a man who thinks he is an angel from heaven. he states that god appeared to him while he was in jail for a car theft and told him to “use the young and pure souls to do away with the wicked” The man gos and uses children to kill for him. he promises these children openness in heaven and that they will live forever. the main charecter is one of these kids
2nd story: i know this is strane and i havent started writing it unlike the other story but here it goes. it starts off 30years in the future. the scientists have thought of a way to reach pluto. it has a spaceship that the goverment has worked on since technology was discovered. it has gigitons of propulsion and would make it to pluto approx. in 20 years. the astronauts go on this ship. they launch off to pluto. when they get past jupiter the communication is lost and the story then turns on the astronauts family on earth. then Nasa gets a message in the voice of the captain of the ship. it says in a fuzzy message that can barely be heard…we…chzchcz..we found.chzzzzzz….hea….chz ven. Nasa studies it and finds that it is close enough to be we found heaven. thats all for know i could go on and on.
just tell me what you think of each and which one is better and which one i should start first and any suggestions would help
Thanks so much, i already started writing the first idea and im not sure if i should portray the man as a cultist or like something else. yuo opened that up to me because you said “recruiting”
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